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Saving a Savior
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:30:39 PM in AEST
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It seems you've saved me once again.
You always seem to know what to say,
Though I wish that you could calm my fears,
And be around to dry my tears.
The darkness grows, and you are the light.
You try to convince me that everything's alright.
My fear grows stronger and colder each day
As I fear they will come and take me away.
You've saved me again, please let me save you.
It seems that it's the least I could do.
This tightness in my chest just won't go away..
Please forgive me for all that I do;
You know that I'm doing this all for you.
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ChaosFactor
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2009-12-15 19:30:39]
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Re: Saving a Savior
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by Voice of the Silent on
Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 07:50:53 PM AEST
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You have no idea well this suits what's going on in my life, Great poem Really great poem
Hope to read more soon
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Re: Saving a Savior
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 04:32:25 AM AEST
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A very generous write, giving it's all.
i really like it... well done x
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