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The Fountain
Contributed by
blackletters
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Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 09:47:31 AM in AEST
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I stared today without seeing
Blinded eyes, performing without error
Controlled by thoughts as images flowed in front
I heard it, the water
But all I saw was them
So beautiful as they followed the contours of the course
I miss you
I was still as I watched them
Trapped by my character
Haunted by my conscience
Unable to stop them as I heard the drift of time laugh at me
Remember me when you get to the bottom, I sobbed.
I reached out to nothing as my empty eyes came into focus
And left behind the puddle of moments they gave me as I walked away
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Re: The Fountain
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 06:04:34 PM AEST
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Oh my!
“Remember me when you get to the bottom”, I sobbed.
I reached out to nothing as my empty eyes came into focus
And left behind the puddle of moments they gave me as I walked away
This is so beautiful, and so sad, it made my heart ache... really ache x
Star x x x
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