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Searching
Contributed by
laydownplaydead
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Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 03:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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As I walk this land of broken dreams,
I have visions of many things. But happiness is just an illusion.
Filled with sadness and confusion.
What becomes of the broken hearted? Who had love that's now departed.
I know I have to find; some kind of piece of mind. Help me please.
Maybe roots of love grow all around,
but for me they come tumbling down.
Everyday heartaches grow a little stronger.
I don't know if I can take it much longer. I
walk in shadows searching for light.
Because there's no comfort inside.
Hoping and prayer for someone who cares.
Always moving and going nowhere.
I'm searching though, I don't succeed.
Someone's love, there's a glory me.
All this place, there's nowhere to beginning.
All that's left is an unhappy ending.
I'll be searching everywhere.
Just to find someone who cares.
I'll be searching everyday.
I know I'll find a way.
Nothing's going to stop me now. I'll find a way somehow.
Copyright ©
laydownplaydead
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2003-04-05 15:45:00]
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Re: Searching
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by shelby on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:17:55 PM AEST
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you express your feelings well.Hang in there better days will come to you.
Michelle |
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Re: Searching
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:57:28 PM AEST
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A sad emotional poem full of lost feelings.
Good read, But knowing this you must know that although sometimes life is hard, around evey corner there is a chance, where there is a chance there maybe hope.
Keep looking maybe you will find what you look for. |
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Re: Searching
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by Sk8er909 on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 03:31:57 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem |
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Re: Searching
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by ravenblack_phoenix on
Friday, 11th April 2003 @ 10:00:21 PM AEST
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| Awesome =) kinda how I feel now, I like it very much. Gotta keep on hoping right? |
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Re: Searching
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by kamikazehileray on
Tuesday, 6th May 2003 @ 09:58:56 PM AEST
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these are words to a Temptations song, right? fine words
Tom |
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