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Love in the fall
Contributed by
corpsman2000
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Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 08:17:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Fall is here
Its easy to see
The smell of the air
The changing of leaves
Maybe its just a season
Or its the bringing of love
My heart is singing
She is all I think of
A time for walks,
Holding each other close
Or sitting in the leaves
Warming her with my coat
Romantic nights with my girl
One of falls simple desires
Sipping hot chocolate
While sitting by the fire
Maybe a night in the city
With a horse drawn sleigh ride
Down snowy main street
The two of us, all worries aside
A romantic walk
Children playing in the snow
Down a snow covered street
Groups singing Christmas odes
The colors of the lights
Hung on everyones home
Doesnt compare to the way
Her shining eyes bring me home
So many things to do
So many memories to make
Now its all possible
On our holiday breaks
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Re: Love in the fall
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by shelby on
Thursday, 17th December 2009 @ 09:37:32 PM AEST
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Ah this is simply delightful.
It brings in the changing of seasons and the holidays all coming, then all the fun stuff that love is made of. Pretty verse...
this part right here I just adored....... (something Iv been thinking on of late)
Maybe a night in the city
With a horse drawn sleigh ride
Down snowy main street
The two of us, all worries aside
Perfect!
Good for you!
Loved the visuals, you brought sight, feeling, smells and tastes in this write true poetry!
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Re: Love in the fall
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 06:23:08 AM AEST
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Really enjoyed reading this, well written.
Take care |
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