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Give Me
Contributed by
LJ
on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 04:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Anger Rage All un-caged Turning to another page
Give me one minuet Give me an hour To unleash An let my anger flower
Ive hidden it For too long Pushed it back Knowing the wrong
You pushed the issue into the dark Let me be angry Just let me be mad At the way I was had
Give me one hour Give me a day For me to scream And in silence pray
I want to feel it I want to move on I want the light That comes with the dawn
Let me have this day Just let me smolder Turn from red to grey As the anger grows colder
Give me one day Give me a week To dig through the depths Into the soul I seek
Desiring the light To clean out the dirt Scattered with anger Dusted with hurt
Let me have my time To prepare this heart To confess my part in the crime That tore my life apart
Give me one week Give me a month To forgive your transgression Without your confession
Freedom is here Not quite enough Revealed to God No longer able to be tough
Let me continue To move into the light Let me regain My lost precious sight
Give me one month Give me a year To humbly face My greatest fear
To unveil the truth for all To be submersed in the light Humbled by God Transparent to sight
Let me not fear The light or the truth Let me not loose My family so dear
Give me one year Give me
Copyright ©
LJ
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2003-04-05 16:25:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Give Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 06:36:10 PM AEST (User
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Lj this was really good filled with such true emotion! Christina |
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Re: Give Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by LJ on
Tuesday, 8th April 2003 @ 03:42:48 AM AEST (User
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thank you! |
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Re: Give Me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 12:27:01 PM AEST (User
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Excellent poem and expression, LJ. Good thing to deal with a problem squarely so you can get on with life! Good for you.
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