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The Closet at the End of the Hall
Contributed by
Jammy
on
Friday, 18th December 2009 @ 04:04:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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I can't stand it anymore.
I wish you would say something.
Something is better than nothing.
Not knowing is killing me.
Until you find your heart,
I'll be in the closet at the end of the hall
losing my mind.
Hiding from the world.
I don't want them to pity me.
I got myself into this mess.
I don't need their sympathy.
No one can help me.
No one can take me out of this loneliness.
No one can make me smile.
Except you.
If
only you would come to the rescue
And take me out of my misery.
Until then,
I'll be in the closet at the end of the hall.
Copyright ©
Jammy
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2009-12-18 16:04:37]
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Re: The Closet at the End of the Hall
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by northernlights on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 12:13:46 AM AEST
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| Great imagery of being emotionally locked away and declaration of a personal journey with the belief of only one person holding the key to the closet. I hope the key is on the inside |
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Re: The Closet at the End of the Hall
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 09:28:13 AM AEST
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So full of emotion, tihs is stark naked, totally exposed & very fresh.
Fantastic write, well done!
Star x x x
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