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Where Are You?
Contributed by
XslainhopeX
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Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 10:52:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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As soon as I thought i found u.
And i asked u if you would stay.
U ran away.
Like a lost dream.
I ran after you.
So i could find u again.
But in the end .
It ended in me failing.
Why do u show up for everyone else.
But leave me to sit in the dark.
I sit here hoping for your arrival.
But at the end of the day im just disappointed.
Where are u Love?
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XslainhopeX
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2009-12-19 10:52:35]
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Re: Where Are You?
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by laststarontheleft on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 11:13:36 AM AEST
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This poem is so full of emotion, sometmes we are
blind to our own actions, and we must must must
stand back and look at what is happening around us.
A good write x
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Re: Where Are You?
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by fallensaint on
Saturday, 19th December 2009 @ 04:54:39 PM AEST
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Great write.
I can relate
Sometimes we run blindly in and get hurt yet it teaches us that we need to do that in order to have something to hope for.
Once again, great poem.
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