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one aspect of things
Contributed by
vicky_cross1990
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Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 01:58:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Life is a prison,
Oh god let me out.
No-one to listen,
To hear when you shout.
Climb the walls of insanity,
Ride the waves of despair.
If you fail it don't matter,
There's no-one to care.
Used to wish for a window,
To see birds, trees and sky,
But your better without one
stops you aiming too high.
Watching freedom is painful,
For those locked away.
Seeing joy, love and happiness,
Another price that you pay.
Cell walls built by society,
with rules to adhere.
If you breach the acceptable,
You had better beware.
Hide the pain, carry on,
Routine is the key.
Don't let on that you're not,
What your pretending to be.
Lock it all up inside you,
How badly that bodes.
Look out for that one day,
When it all just explodes.
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vicky_cross1990
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2009-12-20 13:58:45]
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Re: one aspect of things
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 03:20:43 PM AEST
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I know just what you mean here, i feel locked up myself,
totally at the mercy of hands i cannot control,
but yet they control me without question!
Really great write.....
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Re: one aspect of things
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 01:29:24 AM AEST
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Yes society seems like a prison at times, and all the problems that life can give
well written.
Take care |
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