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Helpless
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 08:25:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Ripped from the womb, 3 months premature,
Tubes inserted throughout me, but none are helping,
Beep...beep...beep
I cry and scream, but no one seems to understand me,
They just stare, point, and stick sharp things in and out of me,
Beep...beep...beep
I hurt really bad, will someone please help me,
I just became warm, now I'm cold and wet,
Beep...beep...beep
My screams become louder, and soon I lose my voice,
I start moving, ow...one of the tubes just came out,
Beep...beep...beep
What is this warm stuff hitting my face?
The light is fading, my breathing has become labored and heavy,
Beep...beep...beep
Expand...collapse...
Expand...collapse...
Beep...beep...beep ---------.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
Copyright ©
The_Phantom
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2009-12-21 08:25:52]
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Re: Helpless
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 09:38:30 AM AEST
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| Wow, it is graphic...and sad. Very sad indeed. |
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Re: Helpless
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 21st December 2009 @ 10:59:13 AM AEST
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My my, I can't get this one out of my head.
my mind has been pierced with a haunting vision, and its certainly not for the faint hearted.
an extremely powerful & well portrayed write phantom.....
Star x x x
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Re: Helpless
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 04:23:40 PM AEST
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I agree, very sad but well written.
Is this the one you was talking about?
Huggs, blessings, safety,
emy |
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