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see you in hell
Contributed by
hardcoreputa
on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 08:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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For years I have hated you,
I'm sure you already knew.
I yell and I scream and I fight.
I try to hurt you with all of my might.
But for years I could do nothing,
Because u never cared about me or anything.
But today I look at you and I grin.
For today I know that I will win.
It wasnt enough to just despise,
I couldnt keep hiding behind these lies,
For some reason I have always wanted u to care,
But no matter what, u were never there.
So if u wont be what I need u to be,
Then today is the last u will see me.
I told u this but it had no effect,
U merle thought it was an empty threat.
So I'm leaving today, goodbye, farewell,
Wont see u again till I see u in hell.
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2003-04-05 20:25:00]
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Re: see you in hell
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Saturday, 5th April 2003 @ 09:30:51 PM AEST
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| Anger fueled by hate and mistrust, a good write. |
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Re: see you in hell
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by Opium on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:39:43 AM AEST
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| If they really don't care, then you'll be doing them a big favor |
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Re: see you in hell
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by M on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 08:10:15 AM AEST
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| Amazing... |
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Re: see you in hell
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by full_blur on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 01:15:00 AM AEST
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| u rock, the rythmn of this poem is great! |
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Re: see you in hell
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by wolfflow on
Friday, 18th April 2003 @ 04:41:58 PM AEST
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| the passion, the strength and depth of feeling, the tempo and motion of it make this a very interesting read |
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Re: see you in hell
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by Cancer on
Monday, 21st April 2003 @ 05:16:31 PM AEST
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bad ass. unbelievably accurate for so many other teens. expressed perfectly. i enjoyed this more each time i re-read it.
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