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Frozen
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 07:36:56 AM in AEST
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EmotionalPoetry
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~Frozen~
Took my heart crushed like ice now lay frozen lost in time will never warm the blood now cold frozen in this man now lost searching deep inside his soul for the ghost of love now lost in time once mine to cherish now gone forever my soul now frozen like a picture just to hang forever
~Frozen~
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2009-12-23 07:36:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Frozen
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 08:03:12 AM AEST (User
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IHi Fuzzy,
I love the way you've wrapped your words
within themselves, using mirror imagery.
A very nice write poppet x
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Re: Frozen
(User Rating: 1 ) by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 23rd December 2009 @ 10:25:45 AM AEST (User
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I liked this read frozen, like forever printed on our heart
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