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Fates Hand
Contributed by
Sbernie19
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Friday, 25th December 2009 @ 12:03:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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As fate walked by and waved its hand,
too soon it passed, farewell this land.
The moment had come and danced in the wind,
the face of doom in the shadow grinned.
A brush of smoke and clap of fire,
hand in hand so soon to retire.
A brush of wind and dust out the door,
all that remains is you on the floor.
You grasp with your hand the emptiness of space,
so tight is this room so small such a case.
The walls closing down as he smiles a goodbye,
you see his back and only wish it a lie.
The doors turns to glass that you can not seem to break,
smaller this room for the choice you had to make.
The walls turn to light and youre floating out the door,
the people below their fates do you adore.
A bustle of freedom a blindness of truth,
so innocent to desire is their lack of the proof.
So high into the clouds you wish you were there,
so long ago you only did care..
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Sbernie19
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2009-12-25 00:03:39]
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Re: Fates Hand
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 25th December 2009 @ 01:38:50 AM AEST
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Well look forward to reading more of your poetry
like this very well written.
Take care
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Re: Fates Hand
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 25th December 2009 @ 03:22:38 AM AEST
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I agree with Fuzzy!
Nicely written x
Welcome, and Merry Christmas to you!
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