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Im not a writer...
Contributed by
karinagutierrez121
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Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 06:11:12 PM in AEST
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selfstruggles
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I sat for hours and thought about what to
write.Everything I seemed to jot down wasnt right.
Paper after paper..I tossed and turned throughout the night.
I needed something quick before I lose it.
I wrote about my feelings..but my feelings are as jacked up as me.
I just needed a few words..so I could carry on and be..
I cleared my mind and got my pen...i wrote down everything.
And before i knew it,my whole notebook was full of thoughts i'd never say to anyone.
Now that im done..everythings still the same.Stupid writes' and stupid games
they all say.I'm not a writer and my daddy told me today.So I said..im a liar just like you.
Daddy,I like what i do..it takes out my sadness of all you do.
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 07:28:27 PM AEST
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Don't listen to them. Writing is good therapy so once you like it...keep writing.....
This touched me deeply and that is what writing is about....
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 08:18:19 PM AEST
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Yeah, what Jenni said !!!
Tim
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by lesoleilnoire on
Sunday, 27th December 2009 @ 09:09:49 PM AEST
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You are a writer. What you wrote here proves it. You convey your thoughts and express your emotions quite effectively. I am sorry for the tough times you may be having with your dad. Keep writing because you are a good writer.
Heidi |
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 28th December 2009 @ 03:37:18 AM AEST
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Yes you are a writer, and a very good one at that.
you keep writing
Take care
Fuzzy. |
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by Ambivalence on
Tuesday, 29th December 2009 @ 07:03:41 PM AEST
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continue writing and nobody has to know
about it, well as least u can post em on this website!
that's all i gotta say =)
take care
-K.Z.
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Re: Im not a writer...
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by Sexygirl on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 01:01:30 AM AEST
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| Words on a piece of paper is where it ends but really it comes within your heart.I know the trials of getting it on paper.I haven't had too much time to write some new words myself. I promise to change that .I hope that we all can see more writes from you.Good writes to you... |
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