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Death
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 10:15:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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What if I want to die?
Is it ok if I dont want to try?
Please let me go, please set me free;
Theres nothing I can do so get away from me.
Youre killing me; I cant breathe.
Cant someone just help me please?
I hate my life and its all my fault.
I just wish you knew youre all Ive sought.
I loved you once and I love you still;
God knows I probably always will.
But Im meant to be alone, though no one sees
That the one whos fault that is is me.
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ChaosFactor
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2009-12-30 10:15:11]
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Re: Death
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 30th December 2009 @ 12:20:18 PM AEST
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This is well written, the last line is very open.
We all make mistakes that sometimes we're not willing to admit to.
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