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Losing
Contributed by
SilentMuse
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Thursday, 31st December 2009 @ 10:58:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Slipping through my fingers
At last I'd found a friend
I was as happy as I could be
But sometimes I feel
He's slipping away from me
I try to pull him close
And hold him tight as I can
But he seems to be fading away
Falling just like sand
I've seen the mark on him
It's one I know to well
Death is pulling on his heart
I must pull harder
I cannot fail
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SilentMuse
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2009-12-31 22:58:43]
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Re: Losing
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by laststarontheleft on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 04:46:18 AM AEST
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This is a touching & emotional write....
Nicely penned x
Star x x x
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Re: Losing
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by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 05:06:16 AM AEST
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| really touching !!!god bless |
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Re: Losing
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by Libertina on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 07:26:15 AM AEST
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I really agree to the other comments.
Anyway, I can't figure out what is meant by the 'mark on him'.
The poem has emotion anyway, and I enjoyed reading it, too. But now I'd really like to understand it as well... ;) |
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Re: Losing
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by Voice of the Silent on
Friday, 1st January 2010 @ 03:46:37 PM AEST
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If I know who you're talking about, not sure, but I have a guess, I'll help, I don't want him to get pulled away either...I'm trying to help but I have no idea if my guess is right, all the same, I'll try.
-Kelly- |
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