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Inspired
Contributed by
eshine
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:16:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Im not inspired
By the silence like breeze
That brushes the trees
Which lift up the leafs
The dust of yesterday
It needs not to be here
As today has come like wind
Leaving yesterday intact
Procrastination has no name
Should never even begin
As the blue moon
Has showed its face
At the beginning of a journey
Leaving us obscured
Yet mesmerized by its mystique
Never to know
If the brightness of day
The darkness of the night
Or the ever spiraling milky way
Which will light up our sky...
I'm inspired
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-01-03 08:16:13]
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Re: Inspired
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:39:49 AM AEST
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enjoyed this very much, yes something magical.
Take care
Fuzzy
Never to know
If the brightness of day
The darkness of the night
Or the ever spiraling milky way
Which will light up our sky...
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Re: Inspired
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 10:20:31 AM AEST
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Wonderfully poetic and inspiring. I love your word choices. It makes for a beautiful and intriguing read, not to mention, excite the writer in all of us.
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Re: Inspired
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 05:31:01 PM AEST
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Very interesting, there is so much more to this than meets the eye....
I will covet this one!
Very clever x
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