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Far North
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 03:12:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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The moon shows it's face as i look
far north the stars wonder do you
see that moon my eyes search
just for your face far north again
i gaze stars seem a tear drop
above in the heavens seek the
far north was my home with
you we looked at that moon
shines above the heavens
of love in the far north my
soul i left my heart drifts
in the stars far north above
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-03 15:12:46]
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Re: Far North
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 03:48:26 PM AEST
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Surprisingly, this poem is very peaceful.
It really feels like a new chapter is beginning, letting go of something precious,
but still yielding the memory of beauty which once was....
Very inspirational in its own rite x
Really lovely! Lisa x x x
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Re: Far North
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by musicrox13 on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:31:33 PM AEST
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| i love it(: keep writing(: |
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Re: Far North
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by inkmaster on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:39:18 PM AEST
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Fuzzy,
i can relate to this for I am also far north,
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Re: Far North
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:12:44 PM AEST
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well, what a romantic piece of melancholy. "...my heart drifts in the stars far north above". How wonderful. so blissful this piece is, and yet there is quiet the spark of sadness. This one really pulls the heart in numerous directions.
Seléne ~
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