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Two Red Roses
Contributed by
musicrox13
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Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 04:23:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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you say your sorry,
you didnt mean it,
but you dont know,
that everyday without you..,
it was killing me,
because love is the slowest form,
...of suicide...
Copyright ©
musicrox13
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2010-01-03 16:23:00]
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Re: Two Red Roses
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 08:01:02 PM AEST
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wow. That final observation is a killer. But damn, if it isn't very close to the truth. We walk a very thin tightrope sometimes when in love. and it takes strength and perseverance to overcome the emotion that seemingly takes over our sensibilities. This short little piece is packed with power. It stabs right through the heart.
Seléne ~
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Re: Two Red Roses
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:34:27 PM AEST
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They say love is
blind,and truly
i think it just takes
control, a mental
pain that can destroy
well written
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: Two Red Roses
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 08:57:47 AM AEST
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| I love it.. So, in a sense i am killing myself for you, or just because of you... =) |
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Re: Two Red Roses
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 6th January 2010 @ 02:59:22 PM AEST
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powerful and to the point!
i love the last two lines,
but i guess we humans need it
to feel alive?!?!?
take care
-K.Z. |
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