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Your Star
Contributed by
theurbanpoet
on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 05:27:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I can hear your voice calling me, it's coming from the midnight sky,
I reach for your star as i let out a cry,
You're dazzling in the abyss watching over my every move,
As I drink myself to death, I know you would disprove,
Your star twinkles as I yearn from you back,
I see nothing but stars as i hit the ground with a whack,
I can not live through the day without the protection of my star,
I put away the whiskey as I start the car,
My destination is the starry sky above,
Finally to be reunited with my long lost love,
The car leaves the cliff and i fall to my fate,
Two stars will shine tonight, me and my soul mate
Copyright ©
theurbanpoet
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2010-01-03 17:27:26]
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Re: Your Star
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 05:40:45 PM AEST
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So vivid, so real, this is a devastating write.
I only hope it is just a write x
Star x x x |
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Re: Your Star
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by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 3rd January 2010 @ 11:26:38 PM AEST
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Feel so much pain here
i also hope this is only
in the write'
Take care
Fuzzy |
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