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burn this feeling away
Contributed by
eshine
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Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 07:49:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My heart is bleeding
Pouring like a waterfall
With no mercy or care
Tearing and tripping
Bearing and the ripping
Digging into the depths
Of a soul that bears no more
Dried in thick charcoal of blood
I draw the last images
Of life outside this misery
The Sun burns the wheel of straw
Clearing the path for another brighter day...
Copyright ©
eshine
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2010-01-04 07:49:12]
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Re: burn this feeling away
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 08:55:29 AM AEST
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I can hear the waterfall, the tearing & the ripping.
Good imagery...
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Re: burn this feeling away
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by brittany24 on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 05:24:14 PM AEST
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| I LIKE THE WAY YOU ENDED WITH HOPE FOR A BRIGHTER DAY. |
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