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Enough
Contributed by
ChaosFactor
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Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 09:33:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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I love that you come to me when the world becomes too much,
Though I hate that no matter what it'll never be enough.
I hate that you cry; I live for your smile.
That's why I put up with this all the while.
Now you've brought me out of my secret abyss,
When for years all it would have taken is just one kiss.
But now you're here, and for no that's enough;
It seems I'm still learning from this silent love.
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ChaosFactor
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2010-01-04 09:33:39]
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Re: Enough
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 09:56:16 AM AEST
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A compassionate write...
I like the way you have brought the feelings in this poem full circle.
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Re: Enough
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by brittany24 on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 05:21:26 PM AEST
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