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My Last Plea
Contributed by
CaBann
on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 10:28:36 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I'm screaming your name.
But my words you can't hear for they are full of sorrow.
Just to float away, nothing but a whistle in the wind.
Chiming a melody you refuse to hear.
The louder I scream the faster you disappear.
Chasing you out the door with my echo of, listen.
Listen to me, can't you see I'm dying.
I can no longer weep,
No longer sleep.
Breathing has become impossible.
Listen to me, can't you see you're killing me.
There's no life left in me.
I'm crying out to you;
I need you, I need you.
I fade into my tears and wash away.
Why didn't you stay...
Copyright ©
CaBann
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2010-01-04 10:28:36]
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Re: My Last Plea
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by longhaircg on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 10:49:21 AM AEST
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so much pain in your words, I feel them so deep because I walked away from love I wish I had stayed
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Re: My Last Plea
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by Fuzzy on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 11:29:45 AM AEST
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coming to terms with lost love
is i think one of the most
heart wrenching, it's for
me just like mourning
as if something has died.
Can feel the pain in the poem
well written
Take care
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Re: My Last Plea
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 12:05:32 PM AEST
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Hi, welcome to YPDC!
This piece has been painstakingly written, with a pouring heart, now so empty inside.....
A really great write x
Star x x x |
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