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I've Become
Contributed by
CaBann
on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 10:40:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Fast becomes slow.
Slow becomes still.
Movements become weak.
Mind becomes hollow.
Heart becomes heavy.
Breathing becomes easy.
Fingers become numb.
Feet edging off the ground.
Sounds becoming winds.
Soul falling to earth.
Me rising above the stars.
Finally, I've become free.
Copyright ©
CaBann
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2010-01-04 10:40:39]
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Re: I've Become
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 11:22:45 AM AEST
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Like this enjoyed reading your poem.
Take care
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Re: I've Become
(User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 11:47:15 AM AEST
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After reading this, I felt so very peaceful,
as if a warmness had passed a cloak around my shoulders.
This poem brings such a sense of release, it is quite hypnotic!
Star x x x |
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