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The Circle Intact.
Contributed by
mysticmercury
on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 11:33:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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It occurs to me once in a while
that all this time of wandering
that who I am, that I could be
in this world of eroded illusions...
I know maybe this entire attempt
is just a rigid waste of words
that I maybe a failed poet
or just poetry isnt my thing.
But the circle of this suffocating life
In midst of all triumphs of all agonies
Whilst the race for a new providence
And in the ghetto of hope of desire
When it strolls like a silhouette
In the canal between lust and love
And flies or falls alone unbound
Then you know how it works,
..Purple, azure, yellow, dark.
End of today, each day, you know
Theres a better serenade tomorrow
Maybe you believe in it maybe you dont
and as the flame flickers,
with your eyes; and your cheek blushed,
made me engulf in the sea of desire.
of course, Im no lover, nor my heart a poets one
But this idea of serenity in you
Emerges with the dwarves of dawn,
Then dissolves with the ashes of dusk,
And always I keep on ending
the place where it all began
The circle intact.
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Re: The Circle Intact.
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by theunknown on
Monday, 4th January 2010 @ 11:43:44 PM AEST
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u sound like a poet to me
very nicely written and not only tht but its the truth |
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Re: The Circle Intact.
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by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 04:06:09 AM AEST
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brilliant,very well written
Take care
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Re: The Circle Intact.
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 16th September 2020 @ 12:21:24 PM AEST
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Wow! So many quality and juicy, descriptive lines. ..
and you say you aren’t a poet. Hogwash!
~Scorp |
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