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BABY BLUE
Contributed by
daylynn_van_wyk
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Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 03:45:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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My broken heart A victim to a deadly plague of relentless despair echoing decay throught out my internal fiber, It consumes warmth imprinting sorrow, An eternal life in pain proceeds as i pray for tomorrow.
I glare through my window into a colorless world
ridiculed with hate, questioning how can man survive such cruel fate.
A missionary of despair, an evil nature she contained eating my soul without care she reaped good memories, which laid in the past leaving a trail of destruction, which seemed infinitely vast.
Dreams lost and now only ash lay, my heart once inhabiting hopes of a better day, like a burnt out cigarette, resting in this worldly ash tray.
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2010-01-05 03:45:51] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: BABY BLUE
(User Rating: 1 ) by Fuzzy on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 04:02:30 AM AEST (User
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excellent write.
Take care
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Re: BABY BLUE
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 07:24:10 AM AEST (User
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So full of pain and raw emotion......
Very nicely written x
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