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Devil's claw
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 05:39:59 AM in AEST
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~Devil's claw~
Flame burns around my feet slowly
sink down depths of despair Devil
grips my black heart now vengeance
i seek in devils hand this now is
my land burnt heart now beats
for pain and sin upon my soul
lay deep within now my time
to follow ride with the evil cry
for pain been given now for
me pain to seek for vengeance
in my grasp my hand now as
the Devil's claw reach out my
revenge now within my soul
lost in Devils place below
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-05 05:39:59]
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Re: Devil's claw
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by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 07:09:58 AM AEST
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Hot and fiery!
Nice write Fuzzy...
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Re: Devil's claw
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by eshine on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 08:10:32 AM AEST
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| nice flow of words... |
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Re: Devil's claw
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by longhaircg on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 09:11:01 AM AEST
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oh yes nicely done spill of words lots of meaning
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Re: Devil's claw
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by northernlights on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 09:20:25 AM AEST
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| Flame burns around my feet slowly ouch I get the sinking feeling into hell love the imagery in this and the feeling the poem creates well done my friend |
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Re: Devil's claw
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by inkmaster on
Tuesday, 5th January 2010 @ 10:57:11 AM AEST
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This is great fuzzy,
I feel you on this poem. I am also a part of that army I often feel.
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