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Keep trying to find you
Contributed by
SilverGirl
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Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 09:08:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Keep trying to find you
I keep trying to find you
Find you in every wish I make
Find you in every dream I make
And I know it sounds like a clich
But you are certainly on my mind
Not necessarily you, or is it
Maybe the idea of you
But there is more to you than the idea of you
I may not be doing you justice,
But maybe I am,
How much do I really know of you
And how much did you really know of you
To long for each other
Or for me to long for you
So maybe I long for the idea of you
I knew you were a mess
But you were also great
Great is what I wanted for us
Great is what I knew you could be
Great is what a part of you was
And great is what I could be with you
I keep looking for you
But I think youre gone,
I think I lost you
And so be it,
You were loving, that I know
We were alike, that I know
There is much in me that you liked, that I know
But you were gone,
You still are gone
And forever will be
We had a dream
And we shared that,
It was gonna be ideal
If not for the scenes
I guess it wasnt meant to be,
Everything went wrong
In every possible way,
Maybe all I can do is sit and wait
I could go on, for long,
I could go on for how much I miss you
And how much it filled my bones,
But I guess it wont do any good now,
What good are all these lines anyways
Thats why by here they end
Copyright ©
SilverGirl
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2010-01-07 09:08:19]
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Re: Keep trying to find you
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by longhaircg on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 11:02:25 AM AEST
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nice write, I liked the way you pondered on what could have been or maybe what still could be.
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Re: Keep trying to find you
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 03:14:35 PM AEST
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| I like that.... the idea of you.... |
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Re: Keep trying to find you
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by SilverGirl on
Thursday, 7th January 2010 @ 04:02:29 PM AEST
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| I apologize if it's missleading. That's not really poetry, it has no rhym of balance. It's just thoughts ... |
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Re: Keep trying to find you
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by Fuzzy on
Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 03:02:22 AM AEST
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you say,It's just thoughts well i guess
that's what poetry is, does not
have to rhyme you show much
emotion in this, i myself
think its very good
Take care
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Re: Keep trying to find you
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 03:42:48 PM AEST
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I have to agree with Fuzzy.
This was tenderly written, & with much heartache. You question yourself many times within this poem,
and there is nothing wrong with that at all. I commend you for it!
"I knew you were a mess
But you were also great
Great is what I wanted for us"
Really lovingly put x
Star x x x
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