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Reality Of Love
Contributed by
The_Phantom
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Emotions explode, love unfolds,
Lake of fire, ignites my desire,
To love someone true, is to love you,
Moon's shimering light, dragons take flight,
On the wings of love, your all I can think of,
Lonely and fading, heartbroke and waiting,
For you to return, my body yurns,
Cries in the night, pain I can't fight,
Sealed in a tomb, I'm waiting for you,
Shooting stars, memories of painful scars,
Love in your eyes, was it all a lie,
River of tears, I surcome to my fears,
Giving in, to the comfort of sin,
Blinded by love, I release my own blood,
Lay on a bed of nails, let my body be impaled,
Free me of this pain, call me insane,
My heart is gone, where ever you are, is where I belong,
You left me for dead, or is it all in my head,
A tombstone engraved, " The Phantom", that's my name,
Put me to rest, I'll scream your name with my last breathe.
Forever Faithful
The Phantom
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The_Phantom
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2003-04-06 13:05:00]
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by lilch4ever on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:11:29 PM AEST
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| Loved your poem very insightful. Nicely written. |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 02:01:14 PM AEST
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Phantom You put these in to beautiful words,
So touching as well! Good peice! Christina
Peace to the troops! |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 07:37:54 PM AEST
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| This is great Babe! I too am waitng in a tomb for your return. |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:54:21 AM AEST
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This is lovely!! Well done.
Michelle |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by venkat on
Saturday, 12th April 2003 @ 03:06:19 AM AEST
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| Even though this looks darker.. there is great reality.ie the strong yearning of heart.. great anguish of love for which the heart breakes with death cries.. great write... venkat |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 14th April 2003 @ 11:26:36 PM AEST
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your love and devotion is sooo touching and moving, i love this last line it says volumes
"Put me to rest, I'll scream your name with my last breathe." hugs nessa |
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Re: Reality Of Love
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by BlackFire9786 on
Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 05:22:43 PM AEST
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| wow, this is such an insightful poem, i love especially the last two lines, you are something special and have great talent, don't ever let it go to waste! Luv ya lotz-Lisa |
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