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to belong.
Contributed by
thousandfold
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
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MiscPoems
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your fingertips smudge the outline of my face;
i blur into your hand, suddenly unclear
against smeared sky and bleary world
which i, this island, have only been a part of;
suddenly finding the illimitable whole.
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2003-04-06 13:35:00]
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Re: to belong.
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by tease_whizz on
Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 03:00:36 PM AEST
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| wow, i love this. deep and slightly abstract as well as a beautifully expressed metaphor. i hope we all can experience the 'illimitable whole'. great write, hope to read more of your stuff, Kate x |
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Re: to belong.
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th April 2003 @ 11:56:10 AM AEST
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Poweful write. Short but to the point. I enjoyed it. Write some more!!
Michelle |
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