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cracks in the world
Contributed by
ming
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Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 08:52:34 AM in AEST
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abstract
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only ever real
at night
promises hidden
every single
shadow drifts
away like smoke
like morning
mist and two crows
dip silently
toward event
horizon seismic
rippling through
aether universal
indigestion
cracks the world.
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ming
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2010-01-08 08:52:34]
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Re: cracks in the world
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by Mars on
Friday, 8th January 2010 @ 09:01:59 PM AEST
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| This reminds me of when I tried meditation a while ago (and I've been working on it recently). I loved the peace nature and solitude afforded me, but I just couldn't sit still. It was as if the tranquility was too much for me. It does remind me of indigestion. |
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