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misunderstood
Contributed by
ming
on
Monday, 11th January 2010 @ 12:13:34 PM in AEST
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nothing exactly
as appears
the cracks
running
time-ticks
swarming
with every
breath go
the way
no promises
words past
layered life
drips my blood
cold light
lying there
giving portend
to a secret
skin smudges
of fear bent
and twisted
pushed to
serve
the poet.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-01-11 12:13:34]
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Re: misunderstood
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 01:11:17 PM AEST
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The fluency so elegant and gracful
There are a variey of demensions explored
One can sense an inate depth
fortified by a charm unmatched
Truly a soothing passage
-D.Truth |
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