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Upon A Bed Of Burning Linen.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
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Tuesday, 12th January 2010 @ 06:30:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Lay your weeping eyes upon my chest Fingers interlaced, embraced Upon a bed of burning linen We rest unforgiving Stained in regret Fevered and wet The dreams we chased have somehow gone astray And the words we never got to say... Bare the force of storm raging out of control Still I ask that I have this dance with you In between the raindrops as they fall heavy in our souls Move with me to the symphony of our own tragedy In a smoke filled room I'd give anything to breathe my last breath with you To hold your flesh against my heart until the love bleeds through And as the days grow colder My arms struggle to reach you To have you exist within my embrace Because you and I have drifted a million miles away Just to end up in the same lonely place Held in a state of suspended grace Our love shakes the foundation of forever And wether the seams of our lives keep us unraveled or bound together Know that I alone have loved you enough for a thousand lifetimes Know that my heart has never stopped crying And if I live another day without you...may I never be forgiven May my broken be consumed by the fire Alone upon a bed of burning linen.
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Re: Upon A Bed Of Burning Linen.
(User Rating: 1 ) by spud on
Tuesday, 12th January 2010 @ 08:01:15 AM AEST (User
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Hi
We all love to write on this site. Some of us
believe we can go further than YPDC, others
among us are just happy to share our intimate
thoughts, in the form of verse, with other
aspirants. Then every so often there appear
lines of prose that would grace the pages of
poetry written by the immortals. This poem has
a few ...... particularly ..... ''Know that I alone
have loved you enough for a thousand lifetimes.''
Beautiful piece of poetry. Well done!
Tommy
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Re: Upon A Bed Of Burning Linen.
(User Rating: 1 ) by laststarontheleft on
Tuesday, 12th January 2010 @ 10:51:05 AM AEST (User
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I wholeheartedly agree with Tommy on this one...
A true, rare, priceless and timeless piece of poetry.......
Absolutely beautiful, I take my hat off to you x
Star x x x |
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Re: Upon A Bed Of Burning Linen.
(User Rating: 1 ) by longhaircg on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 07:52:38 AM AEST (User
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your writings are beyond beautiful, all the words you have written enlightens the soul
thankyou for sharing
sp |
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