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slip away
Contributed by
ming
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Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 01:53:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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skeins of secret
black an argument
both within
and against
light and silky
as a wish
through a cobweb
veil of time
living outside
the pale oh
lovely shivering
moon breathing
space between
slips sideways
as I glide
away...
Copyright ©
ming
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2010-01-13 01:53:03]
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Re: slip away
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 04:04:19 AM AEST
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| i digg:) |
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Re: slip away
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by laststarontheleft on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 09:48:34 AM AEST
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skeins of secret
black an argument
both within
and against
What an excellent turn of phrase...
I really enjoyed this piece, very well done!
Star x x x |
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Re: slip away
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by elle on
Wednesday, 13th January 2010 @ 10:20:26 AM AEST
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| I'm in love with this one, ming! elle :) |
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