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Crazy Notes...
Contributed by
sasha
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Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 09:24:49 AM in AEST
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I woke up the flowers before sunrise today
To hear about the imminent song
They seem to know your route to Eden
Wisdom paused too late and shuddered
Yesterday I was at the edge of the world
My silence around me did some crazy moves
The frangipani dew rained wet on my senses
Fragrant whispers as my sanity swayed with you
Our jasmines lit your radiance once more
Star-lights on me, your face from before sunrise
Your silver-hair kissed from my sated nights
Your arms slowly tightening their moon grip
You cant let go of me as yet, as we drench
Hand in hand in the rain, as I vapor in you
From days you are gone, till you return to us
Slivers of reality tangoing schizophrenic
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sasha
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2010-01-14 09:24:49]
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Re: Crazy Notes...
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by Daylynn_Van_Wyk on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 11:04:47 AM AEST
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| i digg:) very well written and i loved the imagery an flow throughout the poem |
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Re: Crazy Notes...
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by Keykey on
Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 05:31:49 PM AEST
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This poem gave me a wonderful moment.
Loved it. |
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