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why wasn't it me?!
Contributed by
Silent-Cry
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Sunday, 6th April 2003 @ 06:45:00 PM in AEST
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The knife's shaking in my hand
as i slowly walk on the sand
heading towards that harvester of peace
where is resting "sweet" Elise
As i angrily unbury the dead girl
pulling her by her lifeless fiery curls
i wish she could open her eyes and see
all the rage boiling in me
i wish she could open her mouth and scream
begging her god to make it be a bad dream
Stabbing her as hard as i can with my knife
i wish i was the one who had taken away the life
of that THING so hateable,the daughter of my dad's wife.
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Silent-Cry
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2003-04-06 18:45:00]
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Re: why wasn't it me?!
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 19th April 2003 @ 10:52:21 AM AEST
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| Whoa!! this is different, i really like it, a mad poem |
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Re: why wasn't it me?!
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by gina on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 12:56:31 PM AEST
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:| but who killed her? ,and wat she'v done , the poor girl , ma 7aram! :@
oh , its not real ! i got carried on hehe
GINA |
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Re: why wasn't it me?!
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by hardcoreputa on
Tuesday, 22nd April 2003 @ 10:04:19 AM AEST
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| great poem, truely great angle, the hatered is so raw... keep it up ~Apryl |
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Re: why wasn't it me?!
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by Chenobi on
Sunday, 27th April 2003 @ 02:11:31 PM AEST
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| I like it. It's morbid. A lot of anger. Good use of words. Great! |
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Re: why wasn't it me?!
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 12:30:04 PM AEST
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| I totally like this poem, you use your emotions well |
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