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The Kill

Contributed by Keykey on Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 05:21:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Im a good person
I cant do anything like this
But it have been done
My dark side really does exist

Never have I thought
That sorrow turns malevolent
Neither did I know
That everything can get silent

People are looking
But theres no one surrounding me
I got to hide this
I cant let anybody see

Quickly I lift him
But then I heard this loud echo
I turned around fast
I really am getting psycho

I continued on
But I heard voices in my head
I heard one clearly
You mad bastard is what it said

I paused and dropped him
My gun pointed them

There was no one there
But I can still hear the voices
Everything went dark
Dark enough to lose my courses

Then I thought about
This mans family I have hurt
And its all because
I decide to go berserk

I can see the tears
A maniac had killed my son
I can see the pain
God, what have I done

No, I cant take it
My remorse, its getting bigger
I took out my gun
Closed my eyes then pulled the trigger





Copyright © Keykey ... [ 2010-01-14 17:21:38]
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Re: The Kill (User Rating: 1 )
by laststarontheleft on Thursday, 14th January 2010 @ 06:02:00 PM AEST
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And at whom was the gun pointed at, at this very moment?!!
What a chillingly fabulous write!
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