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sad song
Contributed by
lozza15
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Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:53:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
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sitting in her room
all day long
shes sitting there singing
her own sad song
a song about misery
a song about hope
a song about a problem
and how to cope
she wants someone to love her
she wants some one care
but when she turns around
noones ever there
she wanta a family
some friends to call her own
she wantsthese things
so she dosent half to be alone
shes hopeing someone will love her
shes hoping some one will care
she hears a sound and turns around
just to see nobody there
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2010-01-18 07:53:03]
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Re: sad song
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by northernlights on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 10:53:00 AM AEST
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| There is beauty in the simplicity of this poem as it echoes the emptiness of her loneliness good write |
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