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What would of been
Contributed by
jussimac
on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 08:35:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Our eyes connect at what would be...
Her first touch of what will be...
her first breath drawn, what should of been...
The realisation... it will never be...
The denial, it overthrew me
the truth, it cant be
The life that should have been
somehow my special girl escaped me
my baby girl without me
to travel the heavens
with a lonely cry
"daddy please help me"
I've abandoned my faith, god help me
my girl is gone. It cant be
Anger sets in, consumes me.
It's not what I wanted, forgive me.
Her first laugh, would entertain me..
Her first word, what would of been..
Her first mistake, what could of been...
As we grow, what should of been
...
As I look down at what would of been... the most beautiful thing i'd ever seen
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2010-01-18 08:35:38]
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Re: What would of been
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 09:31:37 AM AEST
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You have written something truly beautiful so tenderly, and with great loving care.....
I feel the pain of this poem very closely to my heart, and really admire your sincere
approach to such a deep, uncontrollable and terribly delicate feeling x
Yours faithfully...
Star x x x
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