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Wanting and Waiting
Contributed by
ingeniusidiot
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Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 09:41:09 AM in AEST
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insomniac
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Wanting and waiting
To feel every part of you surround me
Until my breath ceases
And your kiss breathes new life into my lungs
Wanting and waiting
To feel your bare skin against mine
As silence is broken with breathing becoming heavier
As a sigh brushes my ear wanting ever more
Wanting and waiting
For eyes to become hazy as love and lust intertwine
And knees grow weak as two pulses become one
And destiny unfolds
2009
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2010-01-18 09:41:09]
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Re: Wanting and Waiting
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 19th January 2010 @ 03:25:56 PM AEST
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Hey there you are!
I hardly ever come here anymore, I am glad I stopped by for a second.
I love this poem and you can feel the need and want in each word. This write is different for you a different style but I like it.
I hope you are doing ok.
Hugs
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Re: Wanting and Waiting
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 26th January 2010 @ 05:41:47 AM AEST
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I have missed your posts. Fantastic write.
There are those writers who when you read their work, ignight a spark to flame hidden thoughts. You are in the group Sir.
Deadwriter
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Re: Wanting and Waiting
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by thebadguy9999 on
Tuesday, 6th July 2010 @ 05:44:04 PM AEST
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