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Need me
Contributed by
longhaircg
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Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 10:18:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Need me because you love me,
dont love me because you need me.
Know me for the one inside of me,
not what you want to know when you look at me.
Feel me the very soul of me,
not the surface stuff for all to see.
Touch me with thoughts of me,
as I touch you in mind you'll see.
Love me by knowing me, need me because you love me,
dont love me because you need me.
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Re: Need me
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by northernlights on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 11:37:02 AM AEST
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| What a powerful poem,those first two lines are blinding as truth,questioning the origin of someones feelings, and searching for the purity in love that loves the person inside-- the soul. perfectly penned well done |
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Re: Need me
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by laststarontheleft on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 11:58:38 AM AEST
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I would love to highlight the whole of this poem, because it speaks volumes.
I don't think there is anybody that could possibly, in their heart of hearts, disagree
with what you have written here so truthfully....
A superb and extremely well written piece x
Star x x x |
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Re: Need me
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by catapult57 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 04:40:42 PM AEST
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What a terrific opening line...a little dart of wisdom.
Great job |
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