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Girl In My Head
Contributed by
Channing
on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:17:46 PM in AEST
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There is a girl in my head,
She hides within its depths
Listening to everything Ive said
And seeing every faade that I shed
There is a girl in my head
And at times we dance
Round and round we tread,
The ground beneath we shred
There is a girl in my head,
She is my siren,
With her song my heart is fed
Keeping it beating its brilliant red
There is a girl in my head,
Untangling my thoughts
She has never mislead
Leading me with her tiny thread
There is a girl in my head
And I will never deny her,
For no matter how much Ive bled
She will remain until I am dead
By Channing Cornwall
Copyright ©
Channing
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2010-01-18 19:17:46]
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Re: Girl In My Head
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by Butterflyperfect on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 09:18:39 AM AEST
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Your poem makes me wonder about the the girl in your head.
Almost like I want to know her.
I'm a little lost in my own head right now.
Very good write though. |
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Re: Girl In My Head
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by Ambivalence on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 11:45:45 AM AEST
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great poem to denote how people can affect us (un)consciously thru all sorts of emotions (anger, pain, love, joy, humor, etc.). well done, hope to read more...
take care
-K.Z. |
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