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Remedy
Contributed by
Ambivalence
on
Monday, 18th January 2010 @ 07:50:00 PM in AEST
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On this fourth floor,
my body has been rotting for almost a month now.
I lie helpless on my hospital bed,
but from the relentless pangs Ive taken
its starting to feel more like my open casket.
Im not sure if I can take this anymore.
My poor family is struggling to pay my life support.
I understand they love me dearly,
yet Id rather sacrifice
than have them bear that burden.
My windows cold-blooded breath invites me.
How could I ignore?
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Ambivalence
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2010-01-18 19:50:00]
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Re: Remedy
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th April 2010 @ 07:38:07 PM AEST
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wow ... what a remedy indeed! This was a heart-tugging write, filled
with a perspective that few may even notice or think about. Wonderfully done.
Seléne ~
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