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A truthful prayer
Contributed by
cryingonmyporch
on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 10:47:07 AM in AEST
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God have mercy on my soul.
Set me free and let me go.
Let me know today is done.
Let me know tomorrow won't come.
Let it fall let it rise.
As long as it starts my early demise.
A heart filled with so little love.
Ask me grief ask me strife;
here I know yet have no lies.
Ask me sorrow I have time.
Here I live but have no life.
In the end all life's a lie,
God have vengeance on this soul.
Bind it tie it never let it go.
Let it know today is hell.
Let it show for tomorrow as well.
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Re: A truthful prayer
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 20th January 2010 @ 01:21:18 PM AEST
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Well written, Comp... but tell me something...are you really THIS depressed? If I am not mistaken, you have a little baby, right? Perhaps you can dwell on him/her and write some happy poetry... just my thoughts... and I don't mean this in a negative way....
Just concerned about you. PM me if you want to talk...
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