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The Light.
Contributed by
Prism
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Thursday, 21st January 2010 @ 09:58:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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In a world of lasting night,
breaks a single ray of light.
As the ray strikes the ground,
it's unseen by those around.
They are too consumed with hate
to see what came way too late.
Then one stops and looks confused,
"What's this?" He in silence mused.
A smile spread across his face,
He walks with a calmer pace.
In a world of lasting dark,
Light has left its lasting mark.
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2010-01-21 21:58:19]
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Re: The Light.
(User Rating: 1 )
by Fuzzy on
Sunday, 31st January 2010 @ 01:47:50 AM AEST
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enjoyed the read,nice write.
As the ray strikes the ground,
it's unseen by those around.
They are too consumed with hate
to see what came way too late.
Take care
Fuzzy |
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Re: The Light.
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by JakerBaker88 on
Sunday, 7th February 2010 @ 10:30:00 PM AEST
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| I have to say this was truly an exceptional poem. Your message was well versed as well as elegantly written. Wonerful job here! |
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