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Day Dream Believer
Contributed by
BitterSweetAngel
on
Monday, 25th January 2010 @ 08:12:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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My day dream believer
Wants nothing more
Than to live within sighs and smiles
Among flowers and not the trials
Of men and their ways, impure
And immersed in the irrelevance
Of such affairs as greed, lust and wrath.
Such depravities are a curse, these sins,
As she weeps for her friends and kin,
Blinded by such distorted comportments.
Deprived of innocence, she weeps and dreams
And it seems she will close her eyes to the world
For days at an end, waiting for it all to end.
My day dream believer
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BitterSweetAngel
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2010-01-25 20:12:59]
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Re: Day Dream Believer
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by deadwriter on
Tuesday, 26th January 2010 @ 05:50:02 AM AEST
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Sadly the evil ways of the world will not end until the world itself ends. Closing her eyes to the world gets only partial reprieve. I for one believe it better to go forth with eyes wide open seeking people who feel the same and connect with them. forming a larger group as we go. it is harder for the world to override a larger group.
Great write though.
Deadwriter
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