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Edge
Contributed by
Fuzzy
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Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 11:14:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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At the edge now i know this is true
mind and body feel weary and worn
nothing makes sense nothing due
lost dismayed mind decayed torn
Nothing fits thoughts give no rest
like a jigsaw of life muddle of mind
future is past the solitude my test
rip out my mind what shall i find
I sit and stare 5 pictures and me
This my future and past that i see
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Fuzzy
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2010-01-27 11:14:25]
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Re: Edge
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 02:20:58 PM AEST
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Quite somber but the image is clear and I enjoyed reading it with this particular line standing out.
like a jigsaw of life muddle of mind
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