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faster and faster
Contributed by
ming
on
Wednesday, 27th January 2010 @ 02:55:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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time turns fluid
measurless
cloudy days
hours merge
as overgrown
trails beneath
unlikely sky
transformed
into a cloudburst
into a storm
pounding thunder
caught & twisted
breath an act
of remembering
self as long rain
as tender woman
unseen...
transformed.
Copyright ©
ming
... [
2010-01-27 14:55:51]
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Re: faster and faster
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 04:53:23 AM AEST
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Your trade marked style never grows old
I always look forward to seeing the inside
of your mind spilled onto a page
the way you've depeicted time and space in progress
through the elements is truly amazing
it hits you like a colloge of speeding light
which leaves you breathless
always a pleasure
-D.Truth |
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Re: faster and faster
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by elle on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 01:25:18 PM AEST
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My dear ming, this is such a breath-taking view of transformation & I simply love it.
One must absolutely love the quote, as well. :)
elle |
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