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Mental Cage
Contributed by
dbl0jen
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Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 08:12:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Inner Turmoil, Seething Rage.
Locked inside your mental cage.
Frustration binds you,
And Life,it finds you,
Trapped inside your mental cage.
From out your cage, I peer inside
And glimpse the soul within.
A soul so bright, and filled with light
To cage it is a sin.
And those who bind you,
Seek to find you,
Resigned to live your life in chains
They seek to gain,
From out your pain,
The light that shines inside.
And out the light,
My souls delight.
And all that lies inside.
To find the key, that frees your heart
Im forever searching.
A quest to end your fruitless rage,
To thereby free you of your mental cage.
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dbl0jen
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2010-01-28 08:12:38]
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Re: Mental Cage
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by Bleedthelove on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 08:22:50 AM AEST
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Bravo. I really like this piece. Nice flow. I only wish someone would free me from my mental cage.
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Re: Mental Cage
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by Voyager on
Saturday, 21st December 2013 @ 12:13:19 AM AEST
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| Nice rhythm and flow, a chop-effect. Reminds me of a poem from my early days few yrs ago. |
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