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In Between
Contributed by
eshine
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Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 01:22:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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What do you do, When your left,
Between the two, how uneven
When hell knocks, On one side,
And heaven on the other,
I lived my life on the edge
Im not sure if I choose heaven
Or have I destined to bleed?
All I know, from the lesson I learned,
Dont ever go less, in any sense
For what you deserve,
You might bleed, you might feel
But it just another lifes filtrate,
Im no longer concerned, for you
Misery is not my folly,
You go your way about, wanting,
Ill go my way about, giving,
Want what you cant,
Makes you mad, I feel
I will meet you there, serene land
Between heaven and hell
Cant you See?
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eshine
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2010-01-28 13:22:43]
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Re: In Between
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by northernlights on
Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 02:14:29 PM AEST
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| I like the depth of thought in this poem and the way you have dealt with some very difficult issues such as feelings of rejection and self worth.The line that says the most for me is, Don't ever go less in any sense for what you deserve. |
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