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Open Container
Contributed by
pat346
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Thursday, 28th January 2010 @ 08:48:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Open container, treat me right
sunlight ignite the sand, in sight
i see the sunrise peek above the horizon
your waking up, in my arms,
don't be alarmed, I mean no harm
it's just you and me and the bright blue sea
for as far as we can see
Dear, a beer, if you don't mind
i don't suppose you'd like to find
a quiet spot to fool around under a palm tree?
The sun is trying, to let us know
the water is warm, so in it we go
its just you and me and the bright blue sea
for as far as we can see
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Re: Open Container
(User Rating: 1 )
by joydeep_nath on
Friday, 29th January 2010 @ 05:58:10 AM AEST
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